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I agree with UberJimmy. Leaves one to wonder and ponder and do all sorts of thinking. Well done. ^_^ ~Capn't Six

The last line did catch the eye. However, on a whole it's lacking and slightly childish. What does winter personify? Just think a little harder, tear apart your subject, disect ...

I've studied fairy tales and folk lore for the past year or so, this is an interesting twist on a classic. And not interesting as in nothing else to say, ...

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My gods...you understood it! BRAVO! ~Six

Beautifully done! I love this one! It's as if I can feel the very motion of his paddling and then his eventual stop. Lovely!

Personally I believe that adding structure to any of my poetry is like putting ketchup on a $30 steak, you just don't do it...and if you do it ruins the ...

In Winnebago land, There ruled a skeleton king With his fleshy, pretty queen. And in the night When the lights were gone, They'd go into their Winnebago And preform unspeakable ...

*golf clap* I love it! I can completely see and feel what's going on. The punctuation at the end give it that jerking hesitation. Keep up the groovy work! ~Six

Sidh is the Irish term for fae or fairies. Nod is the mystical land of dreaming. As for my lack of punctuation, I like to throw it in randomly. Most ...

One would hope so, but that's a point that can be argued. Stairway denied...yea or nay?

"Breakfast at Tiffany's"- Deep Blue Something

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Abomination Intoxication Fornication So many words leave abrasions And who am I to say Whether or not it rains And what are we to gain Serendipidy without the happiness Do ...

Well thank you all for your jovial welcomes! HUZZAH! It's okay that there's no rum...I'll find some...somehow...we pirates have a way of doing that. I mainly write very abstract poetry ...